I think I would like the first one more if the non-perpendicular lines of the sides of the mirror were not showing, ie, if it were cropped a bit on each side. It would give it a vertical tryptic look.
Josh, I don't think you could get away from the off balannce feel of the top one, even with cropping as the top line of the mirror is off just enough. I like the bottom one, as it is more structured but less contrived, if that makes sense. The bottom one is very striking, with the very dark foreground and light mirrored image, it almost makes the eyes work to see it all. I enjoy studying it.
Bottom one.
ReplyDeletesmart, very smart
ReplyDeleteI think I would like the first one more if the non-perpendicular lines of the sides of the mirror were not showing, ie, if it were cropped a bit on each side. It would give it a vertical tryptic look.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys!! That is very helpful, and great critique Josh.
ReplyDeleteJosh, I don't think you could get away from the off balannce feel of the top one, even with cropping as the top line of the mirror is off just enough. I like the bottom one, as it is more structured but less contrived, if that makes sense. The bottom one is very striking, with the very dark foreground and light mirrored image, it almost makes the eyes work to see it all. I enjoy studying it.
ReplyDeletei dont get it
ReplyDeleteThanks Neil. Good feedback!
ReplyDeleteAnthony, I am not surprised.